Hello everyone! How are you all today? Did you guys watch the Super Bowl yesterday? I did - go 49rs! Anyway, today I am featuring Kristin Simmons sophomore novel,
Breaking Point, and I will be doing an awesome
giveaway, excerpt, and review!
Breaking Point
by Kristen Simmons
Series: Article 5 #2
Pages: 400
Release Date: February 12, 2013
by Tor Teen
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The second installment in Kristen Simmons's fast-paced, gripping YA dystopian series.
After faking their deaths to escape from prison, Ember Miller and Chase Jennings have only one goal: to lay low until the Federal Bureau of Reformation forgets they ever existed.
Near-celebrities now for the increasingly sensationalized tales of their struggles with the government, Ember and Chase are recognized and taken in by the Resistance—an underground organization working to systematically take down the government. At headquarters, all eyes are on the sniper, an anonymous assassin taking out FBR soldiers one by one. Rumors are flying about the sniper’s true identity, and Ember and Chase welcome the diversion…
Until the government posts its most-wanted list, and their number one suspect is Ember herself. shoot to kill, and soldiers are cleared to fire on suspicion alone. Suddenly Ember can’t even step onto the street without fear of being recognized, and “laying low” is a joke. Even members of the Resistance are starting to look at her sideways. With Chase urging her to run, Ember must decide: Go into hiding…or fight back?
*A copy was provided by Tor Teen for review purposes*
After liking Article 5 pretty well, I was excited
to read Breaking Point, and I actually ended up liking it better than
the first book. Breaking Point was more
exciting and thrilling, and I felt like the story line was more
fast-paced. The writing was okay, and I
really liked the increased action, as well as the characters. However!
There were definitely some pretty big plot holes (like, for example, who
started the fire) and the book was kind of pointless. Nothing was really accomplished in this book,
and I’ve heard how the middle book in a series is kind of pointless, and I can
definitely see it in this book. The
ending I didn’t really enjoy either. A
really big, thrilling event had just happened when the ending rolled around,
and compared to the thing that just happened, it was a snooze-fest. Also, there was one (yes, only one) twist
(who the sniper was) in this book which, I must admit, I saw coming after about
30 pages. I’m not sure if any of you
guys who have read this book saw the twist coming, but it wasn’t really all
that hard to figure out if you just stop and think for a bit.
Even though the story line was kind of “eh” for me, I
really, really loved the cast of characters.
The supporting cast was really awesome!
Cara, Saun, Billy, Tucker, and Riggins really added to the story, and I
really liked the situation that Ember, Chase, and Saun were in. What I mean is, you would think that it would
be a love triangle, but it’s actually nothing like that, and I really enjoyed
how Ember and Saun got along so well.
Ember was a pretty strong character in this book, and I enjoyed reading
about her. Chase I really enjoyed reading about!
Seriously, he is such an awesome guy, and I really wish that he and
Ember would just get together already, because they’d be so perfect together.
Even with the okay story line and loop holes, I really
enjoyed reading about the characters, and the romance between Ember and Chase,
so this is a solid average book.
3 stars
Favorite Quotes:
“Billy elbowed in beside us, face flushed. He was carrying Gypsy, who was practically
screeching from all the noise. ‘Can you
guys believe it?’ The cat sank her teeth
into his wrist and he wailed, then dropped her on the floor. She darted away between our legs.”
~page 53
“’Miller, don’t be such a girl.’ Sean beat his fist against the door, snapping
me from my trance. ‘You’ll be lynched if
you hog the john much longer.’”
~page 66
“He hid a smirk with a well-timed cough. ‘Becca says if girls don’t talk about their
feelings they keel over dead or something.’
He waved one hand flippantly through the air, and I nearly laughed at
how well my old roommate had him trained.
‘I’m not most girls.’ ‘Too bad,’
he said, slinging an arm over my shoulders.
‘I always wondered what that would look like, death by emotional
overload. Sounds brutal.’”
~page 67
“’Congratulations, Ms. Miller,’ said Wallace. ‘If I hadn’t already assigned latrine duty to
Billy for the rest of his life, the job would now be yours.’”
~page 68
“’You said I was beautiful.’
He smirked and settled back in his seat. ‘I guess I did.’”
~page 222
“’I must have driven you crazy.’
‘You drive me crazy on a pretty regular basis.’
~page 275
~Excerpt~
THE
Wayland Inn was behind the slums, on the west end of Knoxville. It was a place
that had festered since the War, buzzing with flies that bred in the clogged
sewers, stinking of dirty river water brought in on the afternoon breeze. A
place that attracted those who thrived in the shadows. People you had to seek
to find.
The motel’s brick exterior, veined with dead ivy and pockmarked by black mold,
blended with every other boarded-up office building on the street. The water
was ice-cold when it ran at all, the baseboards were cracked with mouse holes,
and there was only one bathroom on each floor. Sometimes it even worked.
It was the perfect location for the resistance: hidden in plain sight, on a
block so rotten even the soldiers stayed in their patrol cars.
We met outside the supply room before dawn, when the standardized power
resumed, for Wallace’s orders. The night patrols were still out guarding our
perimeter and those with stationary posts—the stairway door, the roof, and
radio surveillance—were awaiting relief from the day shift. Curfew would be up
soon, and they were hungry.
I stayed back against the wall, letting those who had been here longer settle
to the front row. The rest of the hallway filled in quickly; if you were late,
Wallace assigned you extra duties, the kind no one wanted. The supply room door
was open, and though I couldn’t see our hard-nosed leader from my angle, the
candlelight threw a thin, distorted shadow against the inside wall.
He was talking to someone on the radio; a soft crackling filled the space while
he waited for a response. I thought it might be the team he’d put on special
assignment two days ago: Cara, the only other girl at the Wayland Inn, and
three big guys that had been kicked out of the Federal Bureau of
Reformation—or, as we’d called the soldiers who’d taken over after the War, the
Moral Militia. Curiosity had me leaning toward the sound, but I didn’t get too
close. The more you knew, the more the MM could take from you.
“Be safe.” I recognized Wallace’s voice, but not the concern in it. Never had I
heard him soften in the presence of others.
Sean Banks, my old guard from the Girls’ Reformatory and Rehabilitation Center,
staggered out of his room, pulling his shirt down over his ribs. Too thin,
I thought, but at least he’d slept a little—his deep blue eyes were calmer than
before, not so strained. He found a place on the wall beside me, rubbing at the
pillow marks still on his face.
“Always am, handsome,” came Cara’s muffled response, and then the radio
went dead.
“Handsome?” parroted an AWOL named Houston. His red hair was growing out and
flipped in the back like the tail feathers of a chicken. “Handsome?” he
said again. The volume in the hall had increased; several of the guys were
snickering.
“You called?” Lincoln, whose freckles always looked like someone had splashed
black paint across his hollow cheeks, appeared beside Houston. They’d joined
together last year, and in my time here I’d yet to see one without the other.
The chatter faded as Wallace came around the corner. He needed a shower; his
shoulder-length peppered hair was greasy in clumps, and the skin of his face
was tight with fatigue, but even in the muted yellow glow of the flashlights it
was obvious his ears had gone pink. One pointed glare, and Houston melted back
toward Lincoln.
My brows rose. Wallace seemed too old for Cara; she was twenty-two while he
might have been twice that age. Besides, he was married to the cause.
Everything else, everyone else, would always come second.
Not my business, I reminded myself.
The narrow corridor had crowded with eleven guys awaiting instruction. Not all
of them had served; some were just noncompliant with the Statutes, like me. We
all had our reasons for being here.
My heart tripped in my chest when Houston moved aside to reveal Chase Jennings,
leaning against the opposite wall ten feet down. His hands were wrist-deep in
the pockets of his jeans, and a white undershirt peeked through the holes of a
gray, threadbare sweater. Only remnants of his incarceration in the MM base
remained, a dark half-moon painted beneath one eye and a thin band of scar
tissue across the bridge of his nose. He’d just gotten off the night shift
securing the building’s perimeter; I hadn’t seen him come in.
As he watched me, the corner of his mouth lifted ever so slightly.
I looked down when I realized my lips had done the same.
“All right, quiet down,” began Wallace, voice gruff once again. He hesitated,
tapping the handheld radio, now silent, against his leg. I caught a glimpse of
the black tattoo on his forearm that twisted beneath his frayed sleeve.
“What happened?” said Riggins, suspicious only when not outright paranoid. His
fingers wove over the top of his buzzed, can-shaped head as though he expected
the ceiling might suddenly cave in on us.
“Last night half the Square went without rations.” Wallace’s frown deepened.
“Seems our blue friends are withholding.”
Pity was a hard sell. Most of us went straight to anger. We all knew the MM had
the food; our scouts had counted two extra Horizons trucks—the only
government-sanctioned food distributers—entering the base just yesterday.
Houston balked. “If they’re hoping to clear town, they’re outta luck. Tent
City’ll starve to death first. People got nowhere else to go.”
He was right. When the major cities had been destroyed or evacuated in the War,
people had migrated inland, to places like Knoxville, or my home, Louisville,
in search of food and shelter. They’d found only the bare minimum—soup kitchens
and communities of vagrants, like the city of tents that had taken over the lot
on the northern side of the city square.
“Thank you, Houston,” said Wallace. “I think that’s the point.”
I shivered. Chase and I hadn’t left the Wayland Inn since we’d pledged to the
resistance, almost a month ago. If possible, the city seemed even bleaker than
when we had last seen it.
“Now,” continued Wallace. “Billy caught a radio thread yesterday on an upcoming
draft in the Square. We don’t know when, but my guess is it’ll be soon, and
they’ll be offering signing bonuses.”
“I didn’t get a bonus,” someone whispered.
“Rations, jackass,” muttered Sean.
A collective groan filled the hallway. Soldiers using the promise of food to
recruit more soldiers. They’d have a whole new army in a week.
“And forgiveness of Statute violations, of course.” Wallace smiled cynically.
More groans followed.
Work was slim these days. The only businesses still running required background
checks, which meant applicants had better be compliant with the Moral
Statutes—a list of regulations that took away women’s rights, mandated a
“whole” family, and prohibited things like divorce, speaking out against the
government, and, of course, being born out of wedlock, like me. This had always
been one of the MM’s prime recruiting strategies. Men who couldn’t get a job
because of their record could still serve their country. And even if it meant
selling their souls, soldiers got paid.
“What’re we going to do about it?” Lincoln asked.
“Nothing,” said Riggins. “We hit something like that, they’ll smoke out this
whole town till they find us.”
I straightened, envisioning the MM coming here, raiding the Wayland Inn. As far
as they knew, Chase and I were dead, “completed” in the holding cells at the
base. I’d made certain of it before our escape. We didn’t want to give them
reason to believe otherwise.
Without looking over, Sean elbowed me in the ribs. I deflated, a shallow breath
expelling from between my teeth.
“Quiet,” said Wallace when several people objected. He shook his head. “Riggins
is right. They plugged up the soup kitchen for seventy-two hours after last
month’s riot. Soon they’ll be compensating anyone willing to sell us out. We’ve
got to be smart. Think.” He tapped his temple. “In the meantime, Banks has a
report to make.”
I glanced over, surprised, as Sean shoved off the wall beside me. He and I had
been up late together scanning the mainframe for facilities in Chicago,
searching for Rebecca—my roommate and his girlfriend—who had been beaten and
arrested the night I’d tried to escape reform school. He hadn’t mentioned that
anything out of the ordinary had happened during his earlier shift in the
Square.
“Yesterday on my way back from Tent City, I ran into a guy looking for trouble
over by the Red Cross Station,” said Sean.
“What kind of trouble?” Chase’s dark gaze flicked to mine.
Sean scratched his jaw. “The kind that makes me think he was looking to join
us. He was trying to convince a group of guys to take out the guards posted at
the soup kitchen. Talking loud—too loud. Said he’d been in the base
lately, that he knew things about it. I very politely told him to keep it down,
and he called me a—”
“What did he know?” I interrupted.
“A lot,” said Sean. “He was just discharged last week. Dishonorably. He
didn’t seem too pleased about it either.”
I could feel Chase’s tension from across the hall. A recently discharged
soldier could have important information about the Knoxville base, he might
even know how to break back in, but what if he recognized us? We’d only been
there four weeks ago. He could have been one of those who had beaten Chase or
even killed another prisoner.
“It’s a con,” said Riggins. “Banks is getting played. The FBR’s sending in a
mole.”
Wallace, who’d been silent while Sean had spoken, cleared his throat. “That’s
why we’re going to tail him. If he gets within ten feet of a uniform, cut him
loose. I don’t want to take any chances with this one.”
“Then don’t,” I said before I could stop myself. “Maybe Riggins is right.”
Riggins snorted as if to say he didn’t want my help.
“You think he didn’t say the same about you when you came here?” Wallace asked.
I felt myself shrink under our leader’s stare. Sean had brought Chase and me to
the Wayland Inn with no more than his word that we weren’t going to spill its
secrets.
“Besides,” he continued, patting the radio against his leg again. “If this guy
can get us access into the base, imagine the damage we could do.”
The following silence was filled with consideration. The MM was stockpiling
food—we’d seen the delivery trucks go in—and there were weapons, not to mention
the innocent people being executed in the holding cells.
I shivered, remembering how I’d nearly been one of them.
Lincoln and Houston shoved each other excitedly, but several of the others
didn’t seem so convinced. Clusters of arguments broke out, which Wallace
silenced by assigning a detail to keep tabs on the new recruit. He tasked Sean
with bringing him in.
Sean fell back beside me, grumbling something indecipherable. The more time he
spent away, the less we had to focus on breaking Rebecca out of rehab in
Chicago. Still, Sean was smart enough to know that in order to use the
resistance’s resources, the resistance had to use him as a resource, so
he did what he was told.
Over the next several minutes Wallace began assigning people to daily duties:
patrol, motel security, and finally, distribution of rations. I paused when he
gave this duty to the two brothers who bunked across the hall from the
bathroom. For the last few weeks it had belonged to me. I’d just gotten used to
the routine, and now Wallace was changing things up.
“We’ve got supplies coming in from a raid last night,” Wallace said, and I
realized this must have been what Cara and the others were doing. “The truck’s
parked at the checkpoint and needs to be unloaded. And there’s a package in
Tent City waiting for delivery.”
I still hadn’t gotten used to people being packages. Fugitives were
moved for their safety to a checkpoint, a secret location where they could hide
until a driver for the resistance, called a carrier, could transport them
across the evacuated Red Zone lines to a safe house on the coast. Once we
helped Sean rescue Rebecca, Chase and I would be going there, too.
My breath quickened. The checkpoint was across town, past the Square.
Two eager hands rose.
“Good. Inventory?”
On impulse, I raised my hand. Inventory kept me here, and kept everything on
the outside, lurking just beyond the rain-stained windows.
“Miller,” said Wallace slowly. “Right.Miller on supplies.”
Chase’s brows lifted.
I dropped my hand and picked at the peeling yellow wallpaper behind my lower
back. Houston whispered something to Riggins, who shot a mocking glance at me
over his shoulder.
“What about next door?” Fourteen-year-old Billy spoke up from behind Chase.
“You said you’d post me there today.” He shoved a mop of mousy brown hair out
of his eyes.
Wallace’s thin mouth drew into a smirk—an expression reserved for the youngest
here.
“Billy, so nice of you to join us.”
“I been here!” His claim was cheerfully denied by those closest.
“You been here?” Wallace mocked. “You been sleeping late, I think.
You’re on the latrines, kid, and Jennings and Banks will clear the abandoned
buildings next door.”
Jennings? Chase was leaving the building? He hadn’t even slept yet. I
tried to glance back over to him, but now other people were blocking the way.
Billy’s chin shot out indignantly. “But—”
“How about tomorrow, too?”
Billy threw his head back and groaned.
A buzz, one that made my spine tingle, and the overhead globes flickered with
light. Curfew was over. The day had begun.
The hall began to clear. I looked for Chase, but found my path blocked.
“Inventory, huh?” Riggins smirked. He had a sorry excuse for a moustache, which
landed directly in my line of sight.
I planted my feet, not about to let him get to me. The guys here were rough,
they had to be, and living with them meant having a thick skin sometimes.
“That’s what Wallace said,” I responded.
“Let’s get some food.” Sean tried to move between us but Riggins stopped him
with one solid hand.
“Watch out in the supply room. There’s rats, you know.” He grinned, the
plucky hairs on his upper lip thinning.
I wasn’t sure if he was serious or just trying to make me squirm. “I’ve seen
rats,” I told him.
“Not rats this big,” he said, stepping close enough to force me back again.
“These rats hide in the uniform crates. You can hear ’em sometimes. They
squeal, real loud.”
Two hands closed around my waist from behind and pinched my ribs. A short
scream burst from my throat. When I spun around Houston was cackling. He took
off after Lincoln, toward the radio room.
Before any coherent words filled my mind Chase was there, his fist twisted in
Riggins’s collar as he shoved him into the wall. Because Chase was several
inches taller, Riggins was forced to lift his dimpled chin to return a hard
glare.
“Temper, temper,” Riggins rasped.
“What’s going on?” Wallace’s voice broke through my surprise. He had rules
about fighting. We were family here, that’s what he always said. All Chase and
I needed was to get kicked out, to be out there again running from the MM.
I squeezed Chase’s bicep, feeling the muscles flex beneath my fingers. His grip
eased, and finally released.
Riggins smiled before sending Wallace a no-problem-here wave.
“Come on,” said Sean. He grabbed my elbow, towing me down the hall toward where
the brothers were distributing dry cereal for breakfast.
Riggins leaned close as I passed. “You actually gonna do something useful
today? Or just disappear again?” When I turned around he was sauntering toward
the west exit, chuckling to himself.
My whole body burned.
It was no secret that Chase and I hadn’t left the motel since we’d escaped the
base, but I didn’t know anyone had noticed that sometimes, when the fourth floor
grew too confined, I’d escape to the roof to clear my head. It wasn’t like I
was hurting anyone, and we pulled our weight where we could. We passed out
rations, and Chase took shifts securing the building, but it wasn’t the same as
pounding the pavement, holding up supply trucks or helping those in danger.
Riggins and I both knew it.
It wasn’t like I didn’t want to do more. I did. I wanted to make a difference,
to help someone, the way no one had been able to help my mother. The MM may
have thought we were dead, but I remembered too well what it felt like to be
wanted. First as a Statute violator when my mother had been charged with an
Article 5, then as a reform school runaway. Chase had been charged with
everything from his AWOL as a soldier to assault. Sometimes I could still feel
the MM breathing down our necks.
But those things didn’t matter to people like Riggins. He hadn’t trusted me
since Sean had brought us here for shelter. And hiding while he and the others
risked their lives did nothing to prove my dedication to the cause.
Fury stoked through me, sudden and sharp. I’d survived the MM’s unforgiving
rules, escaped execution, and come here, to the resistance, where we were all
supposed to be on the same side. I didn’t need Riggins making me feel weak, or
anyone else doubting me.
I shook out of Sean’s grasp and spun around—right into Chase, half a foot
taller and broader even with his shoulders hunched forward. Quite a pair they
were, like my own personal bodyguards. I should have been grateful for their
help, but instead felt small, too in need of their protection.
“I’ll talk to Riggins,” said Chase. “He doesn’t know when to quit.”
“It’s fine. He’s just messing around.” My voice was too thin to be believable,
though, and I could feel the terror and the emptiness pushing back from behind
my thin veil of control. It had been this way since I’d learned of my mother’s
murder. Sometimes the wall felt thicker, sometimes I felt stronger, but it was
all an illusion. It could break through at a moment’s notice, just as it was
threatening to now.
Chase took a step forward. “Look,” he said, leaning down so that our eyes were
level. “We don’t have to stay here. We can catch the next transport to the safe
house. Put all this behind us.” His voice was filled with hope.
“Not yet. You know that.” We had to find Rebecca first; if I hadn’t blackmailed
her and Sean into helping me run away, they would still be together, and she
wouldn’t have been hurt. I could still hear the baton coming down on her back
as the soldiers dragged her away.
“You guys go on. I’ll catch up later.” I cleared my throat. My walls were
cracking. Chase sighed, and after Sean’s prompting followed him down to
breakfast.
Before the despair could take over, I fled down the corridor toward the supply
room. It didn’t matter if I skipped rations; the hollowness inside had nothing
to do with hunger. It wasn’t until the hallway was quiet that I remembered that
Wallace had assigned Chase to clear the empty office building next door, that
he was leaving the Wayland Inn without me. Even if he would be off the main
streets, the thought of him out there alone made me sick.
~Giveaway~
~There will be one winner.
~Giveaway ends on February 15, 2013 @ 12:01 AM
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Bio:
Kristen Simmons has a master’s degree in social work and is an advocate for mental health. She loves Jazzercise, her husband, and her precious greyhound, Rudy. Also chocolate. She currently lives in Tampa, Florida.
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