Showing posts with label 1.5 stars. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 1.5 stars. Show all posts

Saturday, May 4, 2013

{Review} Divergent by Veronica Roth

Divergent
by Veronica Roth
Series: Divergent #1
Pages: 487
Release Date: May 3, 2011
by Katherine Tegen Books (an imprint of Harper)

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In Beatrice Prior's dystopian Chicago, society is divided into five factions, each dedicated to the cultivation of a particular virtue--Candor (the honest), Abnegation (the selfless), Dauntless (the brave), Amity (the peaceful), and Erudite (the intelligent). On an appointed day of every year, all sixteen-year-olds must select the faction to which they will devote the rest of their lives. For Beatrice, the decision is between staying with her family and being who she really is--she can't have both. So she makes a choice that surprises everyone, including herself. During the highly competitive initiation that follows, Beatrice renames herself Tris and struggles to determine who her friends really are--and where, exactly, a romance with a sometimes fascinating, sometimes infuriating boy fits into the life she's chosen. But Tris also has a secret, one she's kept hidden from everyone because she's been warned it can mean death. And as she discovers a growing conflict that threatens to unravel her seemingly perfect society, she also learns that her secret might help her save those she loves …or it might destroy her. Debut author Veronica Roth bursts onto the literary scene with the first book in the Divergent series--dystopian thrillers filled with electrifying decisions, heartbreaking betrayals, stunning consequences, and unexpected romance.




I really wanted to love this book.  I really tried to love this book.  I just couldn’t.  And I really wish I could.  I just had too many issues with it, the first being that there was no world-building or explaining whatsoever.  Roth talked about the factions in the beginning, but didn’t explain why there were factions.  She didn’t explain what happened to make the society what it was, didn’t describe the setting, just went right into the book.  She didn’t even explain why Tris had to go through training!  I mean, you figure it out at the end of the book, but for the rest of it before you are completely clueless.  The writing, for me, was okay.  I didn’t really like the story line or the staging because it was all very obvious and lucky.  The romance was also very poorly done, in my opinion, and kind of annoying.  Even the ending was annoying.  Have you guys seen the movie Hanna?  Cuz I was getting flashbacks of that movie the entire ending.  I didn’t like how dramatic it was.
Also, none of the action/fight scenes were very well done in this book.  The one thing that I did like about this book, though, was the beginning, and also the fact that Roth wasn’t afraid to do the unthinkable (like killing some *cough* characters).  Since you all have probably read this book, I think you know what I mean.

My really big problem with this book were the characters.  I absolutely hated Tris.  There wasn’t really any character development of any of the characters, but Roth at least had a go with Tris, and I know she intended Tris to come across as independent and strong, but instead she came across as arrogant and kind of a bitch.

Here are some examples of Tris’s bitchyness:

His feet were just inches from my head.  I should comfort him – I should want to comfort him, because I was raised that way.  Instead I feel disgust.  Someone who looks so strong shouldn’t act so weak.  Why can’t he just keep his crying quiet like the rest of us?

See?  Not only is she being a total snob, but she thinks that, just because this guy is big and strong, he shouldn’t cry.  What?  WHAT?  And wait, it gets better.

“You think I have to pretend to be vulnerable?” I ask, raising an eyebrow.

I’m not sure if it’s smart to forgive her or not…But my mother would tell me that people are flawed and I should be lenient with them.

“I didn’t think it would affect you this way.”  Then he looks down and shrugs.  “Sometimes I forget that I can hurt you.  That you are capable of being hurt.”


Okay Tris we get it.  You're above everybody, better than everybody, stronger than everybody, and everyone needs to come to kiss your feet.

And Tris wasn’t the only character I didn’t really like.  Four was there too.  He wasn’t a particularly appealing, sexy character; he was kind of just there.  Roth didn’t really develop him or give him any personality.

This idea is really so, so good, and I’m so sad that I didn’t like this book, especially since everyone else has.  There was just too much wrong with this book that I couldn’t pass up.  But I will go check out the movie.

And yes, I do realize that it is kind of pointless to post this review because I will probably not get any comments actually agreeing with me because everyone else has loved this book.  I get that, but I still wanted to put this out there.


1.5 pink flowers

Thursday, March 7, 2013

{Review} Legacy of the Clockwork Key by Kristin Bailey

Legacy of the Clockwork Key
by Kristin Bailey
Series: The Secret Order #1
Pages: 403
Release Date: March 5, 2013
by Simon Pulse (an imprint of Simon & Schuster)

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A teen girl unravels the mysteries of a secret society and their most dangerous invention in this adventure-swept romance set in Victorian London.

When a fire consumes Meg’s home, killing her parents and destroying both her fortune and her future, all she has left is the tarnished pocket watch she rescued from the ashes. But this is no ordinary timepiece. The clock turns out to be a mechanical key—a key that only Meg can use—that unlocks a series of deadly secrets and intricate clues that Meg is compelled to follow.

Meg has uncovered evidence of an elite secret society and a dangerous invention that some will stop at nothing to protect—and that Meg alone can destroy. Together with the handsome stable hand she barely knows but hopes she can trust, Meg is swept into a hidden world of deception, betrayal, and revenge. The clockwork key has unlocked her destiny in this captivating start to a trilogy.



*A copy was provided by Simon & Schuster for review purposes*

Coming into this book, I was unbelievably excited.  The summery looked absolutely amazing…but unfortunately the book wasn’t.  And it’s such a shame because Bailey had such an awesome idea.  I just felt like the story line was so see-through, the whole mystery aspect of the book was way too easy, and the staging was atrocious.  I also didn’t enjoy the romance AT ALL!  I think it was very badly written, and so cliché and done before.  I literally rolled my eyes when I read the little twist in the romance.  This book was just a very simple read, and not really thrilling.  Like I said, I really loved the idea, and I liked the little mythology she put into the tasks, but it was just such an easy plot I couldn’t stand it.  The romance was what really threw me off though.  Bailey introduced it really badly, and it was kind of insta-love, even though it lasted for the entire book.  I didn’t like it because Bailey didn’t develop it.  I realize there was more going on in the book, but if you’re going to make your characters profess their undying love for each other at the end of the book (oops, spoiler) than you’ve got to have put some work into the romance and have built it up.  Sadly, Bailey didn’t, and it really annoyed me how Bailey tried to grow the romance over the course of the story.

I wish I could say that I liked the main characters even a little bit, but unfortuantelyI can’t.  I hated them to no end.  First off, the romance was just atrocious, and that involved these two bimboes, Will and Meg.  Neither character was really developed at all, they were kind of just there.  Will was like a stick of wood, no personality, and really annoying.  Meg was no better, only she was stupider.  Some of the things she said just annoyed me to no end.

I know it’s hard for an author to write their debut novel, and hard to put it out there for people like me to either love or hate, and I really don’t want to be mean, but it just really wasn’t my book.  The combination of a horrible written romance and a horribly written plot was enough to make me not enjoy this book at all, and not recommend it to anyone.

Please note: I don’t like bashing authors.  I respect the hard work they put into writing their books, and how hard it must be for them to lay their work on the line, but some books I just don’t like, and I feel like I would be lying to everyone if I said I loved this book.  Please don’t take any offense, anyone, this review was not meant to be malicious.


1.5 pink flowers
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